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Post by Raven on Dec 13, 2008 15:31:44 GMT -5
i know that, but her name is Flower where everything blooms which that is her full name.
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Rush
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Cave Guard: Rush and Prey Hunter: Dusk
You ain't seen the worst of me....
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Post by Rush on Dec 13, 2008 15:36:24 GMT -5
This story is quite captivating, and yeah, I heard about Shadow and Mary-Jay's kits. They've decided since they're not tribe-born, they're not going to make full name unless they join a tribe, which I doubt.
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Post by Raven on Dec 13, 2008 15:39:46 GMT -5
Ya they probably aren't going to join tribes. Yes my story is. That's why I did it the way it is. I didn't plan on making Flower and Tiger run away and join the rogue group, but after thinking a bit. I thought it might just get others to read it.
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Silver
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Prey Hunter: Silver
GO RANDOMNESS!!!
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Post by Silver on Dec 14, 2008 16:26:57 GMT -5
Like my kits Wood, Cherry, and Storm would.  |
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Post by Raven on Dec 14, 2008 16:31:20 GMT -5
Yes.
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Post by Raven on Dec 14, 2008 16:31:50 GMT -5
I have a question to ask all that red my story.(this is a queation my sister wants to ask you all) Here's a part my sister wants to add to her story she wants to know if it's alright to people who might read it, here's how it goes:
A she-cat was walking towards him. She was walking on puddles of water and her pelt sparkled like the stars. She had ice blue eyes and a creamy brown colored pelt. One-eye looked at her with wide eyes. I must be dreaming 'cause right now I can see out of both eyes! He thought to himself.She was the mere size of an apprentice, but only a bit smaller than him. Her fur looked patched as if fixed and the tips of her claws were red. The reek of newly spilled blood filled his nostrils. He didn't understand why this sweet she-cat would spill blood.
"Dawnclan is not safe anymore from battle. The wall will come down and your clan will be destroyed if you don't fix what Famestar and Jayfeatherhave done." She meows.
"What have they done?" One-eye meows.
"They have exiled Duststorm and now he can become Heartclan's leader. He can lead Heartclan to kill every cat in Dawnclan." She replies.
"Why have you killed a cat?" One-eye meows.
"I have not killed a cat, a cat had killed me." She meows. The patched fur, he bloody claws, the vile smell of spilled blood?
"Cobblerock had done it." One-eye meows. "You're Poppypaw. Snowpaw. No!" He runs off.
""You mustn't let your fear get he best of you." Poppypaw meows after him.
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Rush
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Cave Guard: Rush and Prey Hunter: Dusk
You ain't seen the worst of me....
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Post by Rush on Dec 14, 2008 16:37:55 GMT -5
___ get, not gt. Oh well. Yup, go ahead. |
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Post by Raven on Dec 14, 2008 16:42:02 GMT -5
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Rush
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Cave Guard: Rush and Prey Hunter: Dusk
You ain't seen the worst of me....
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Post by Rush on Dec 14, 2008 16:43:58 GMT -5
She wrote, "You mustn't let our fear g_t he best of you." Poppypaw meows after him. Get it? Get. Now what about those kits now?
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Post by Raven on Dec 14, 2008 16:47:32 GMT -5
Oh, I'll fix that. You mean Silver and your kits right or do you mean other kit?
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Post by Raven on Dec 27, 2008 22:17:42 GMT -5
Flower gasped. "Wow!" Tiger nodded with her.
"Welcome to camp." Charcoal meows. He walks towards the largest whole in the side of the wall. Flower and Tiger follow. The whole area was full of rogues and not one looked the same or smelled the same. "Flare, we have two new rogues to the group."
"Great." A black cat walks out of the den. He of course was black, but had a red scare going across his face and shoulder. He looked at us from head to foot. "Hold on, these are two cats from that tribe. They could just be coming here to spy on us and take info back to their tribe."
"Sir, they're rogues. Why would they go back to a place they had left?" Charcoal meows. Charcoal always seemed to think more than Flare did. They're brothers of course so one has to be a better thinker than the other.
"Point." Flare meows. "You're allowed to stay, but for the first two moons you're here with us, we'll keep an eye on you both." Flare whips around and walks back into his den.
"What about telling the group!" Charcoal yells after him, but clearly Flare hadn't heard. Charcoal sighed. "Come with me. I'm going to put you on a test to see if you'll be a better guard or Prey hunter.
"You do the same thing as we do?" Flower meows. "Well, what we use to do."
"Yes, we do. Us group of rogues have to keep together some how." Charcoal meows as he walks back towards the entrance. Flower was amazed by this, but it seemed more like they also used the thing called deputies 'cause Charcoal did most of the work and Flare just sat back and watched.
"So you also use the thing called deputies?" Flower meows rushing to catch up to Charcoal. Tiger right behind her.
"Sort of." Charcoal meows. "I act like a deputy 'cause Flare seems to really do nothing. He still acts like a rogue, wanting to stay away from other cats." Flower looks at Tiger and Tiger looks back at her.
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